okay so i love this(: she NEEDS to end up with connor i just feel so bad for him and i think they should be together she cant love kevin she just cant and he cant love her either
Oh mann...I'm really curious to see when her mom is gonna find out..will it be before the baby comes or after. Ugh, I hate Kevin & I feel so bad for Connor..I hope you update again soon thought! -xxx
I love this story, it's really unique and it's nice to see a love-in-the-family type story, rather than abuse, though I guess in a way Kevin is abusing Melinda with the way he messes with her head. The way you've written it is really original and I like the way the characters interact with each other, though I'm interested in seeing more of Melinda's weak side.
I'm curious as to where you'll go with this, especially with Melinda's mother, but I can tell that this is going to be a really good story. The only con-crit I could give is that it goes quite quickly, I'd love for there to be some slower chapters to develop the characters some more, but that's just my opinion.
I knew this would come! Gahh, I feel so bad for her, but dang Kevin just makes her situation even worsee. Gahh, I wonder what she's gonna do when her mom finds out. D: Keep updating! Even if they're short.(: xoxo anniee
Awe I feel bad for Connor that Melinda broke his hear because he really has strong feeling for her and for her to just tell him that this was a mistake must have really hurt him. She lost a good friend. Amazing update. :)
I feel bad for both Medina and Connor, he really likes her, but she's just not that into him. Gahh, stupid Kevin! I really wanna like, hang him or something, just because of his stupid self, he's ruining things for Medinaa. I cannot wait for an update! :D xoxo annie
I have to say that Kevin does have a point their that she shouldn't have lead on Connor on like that and now she has to break it to him. Great update. :D
Oh my, Kevin is such a creeper, I just want to smack him. Connor is a good friend, though. I really like this so much [x It's better than a lot of stories I've read. Can't wait for the next.