October 22nd, 2010 at 02:58am
This was....
I am honestly at a loss for words. I really don't know what to think of it. The writing? Oh, the writing was fantastic. It was elegant and twisted; full of meaning and intense description that just seemed to suck you into the drabble itself. The layout is gorgeous, the picture just seems so right. It was left open and vague, for the reader to decide what to make of it I know, but I am honestly just completely blown away by it all. What am I supposed to think? I don't know. I don't know.
My mind is just a mess. The ending completely threw me. The last line, it's so powerful.
I absolutely loved this.
The layout was absolutely gorgeous. Fear impersonated by the blindfold that covers our reason whenever we feel that chill running up our spine. And the title, the fear is real. It's absolutely amazing.
The plot was... I'm like galaxies puts in, "at a loss for words." The narration is fantastic, unique in a way that makes you want to stop reading, because, goodness, does it gives you the chills.
The style in which it was written leaves space for interpretation of the reader, interactive reading, interactive thinking, interactive fleeing away from the feeling. What I took from it? This was fear and comfort, every single fearful moment displaying in front of me as the narration ensued, and then, when comfort kicks in and you're reassuring yourself that "it'll all be alright", that voice within the voice comes out. "Nothing is alright."
The final line just blew me away. It just messed up with my head, and tons of images came by upon reading it.
It was simply brilliant, and how you conveyed such strong emotions and fear in such a small piece... wow. Amazing.