Broken - Comments

This was amazing. I didn't see that coming at the end at all but it fit. You were dead on hon, you do these one shots brilliantly. Thanks so much for letting me into your reading circle. <333

Damn, that was gorgeous :O Seriously, I'm jealous haha. I had my hand over my mouth while reading the last paragraph because I was shocked and I teared up a little. So very, very well-written.

That was beyond beautiful. I was in tears at the end. Fantastic job. :)

wow. that ending gave me chills. great job!

no fair...i'm trying not to cry because i don't have time to redo my eyeliner and other make up for church. that was so sad, i didn't even think it could be his daughter. i thought it was his wife or something. so beautiful, amazing job. and yes, you have gotten the hang of the one shot thing.

That T, was a heartbreaking one shot. You had me in tears at the end and my heart was breaking so much for Brian.
An amazing story Hun. xx

Oh T, that was just amazing, I'm in tears after reading that. I had a little feeling that it was going to be his daughter. At least she had her Uncle Jimmy to take care of her. Wow. Beautiful. xx