Saoirse - Comments

I love how descriptive this is. It really makes you feel like you're there, you write really well. I want to know who she is, and why she's running. It's quite intriguing (:

This was really beautiful. Is this about Ireland or something? It sounds like it from the way you describe...I can just imagine everything. I've yet to go there but I'm more Irish than I am French and I grew up in France. I adore all of the description of this. I could hear the ocean and the seagulls. And I just feel the wind I absolutely adore everything about this dribble. Very, very fantastic.

Oh, love the title! I used to be an au-pair for a girl named Saóirse, and she was adorable!

Anyway, on to the actual story!
I loved it. I loved it because I've done this, as I think a lot of people have.
It's freeing, to sometimes just go out and run. Just run, run, run until you're so out of breath it feels like your lungs will implode.
You described it so well, especially at the end when she stood on the cliff with her arms stretched out into the wind.
I've done this too, and it's pretty much the most free feeling you can get.
Great job, I really loved it!

Aw God – this was great. I loved the picture in the summary and the definition and the Gaelic title – all of it was just fantastic. I’ve told you like three other times, but you’re so incredibly talented and everything of yours that I’ve read I’ve just loved. This whole piece was practically all description, which can sometimes be annoying or boring if it goes on too long but in this case it wasn’t – it was beautiful and detailed and made me picture the scene so easily and perfectly in my mind. I loved this story; you are so fantastic and created such breathtaking images in this – amazing job.

It's been a long time since I have read a drabble. Like, say, three months? I really believe this has inspired me to read more of them. Yet again, I love the detail. I might add, that me being Irish I was estatic for someone to use Gaelic in the perfect context. Loved it!

I love this!
I also love how you used an Irish name (:
It was so amazing and detailed despite the shortness of it.
You always show great detail in your stories, honestly, amazing (:

It's stories like this that make me want to live near the ocean.
This kind of reminds me of an opening sequence in a movie.
You know main character running somewhere and they stopped, then the movie begins.
Really awesome.

Moving towards the very edge, she spread her arms out and closed her eyes, letting the wind and the spray surround her, the sound of the waves making sure no worrying thoughts could get to her. - my favorite line, because even with the light description it's a perfect picture.

=)

I really love how even your drabbles have a ton of details and feelings. God knows alot of people can't do that. xD Great job, once again! :D <3

That was... ingenius.
You didn't really add random details on her character, but you really did talk about the freedom. I was her, I was running down the grassy slope and towards the water. I could feel the wind and waves and grass beneath my feet. Your details was marvelous and everything seemed to flow perfectly. As said in the comment above, it seriously did calm me down, and it made me feel free- this sounds almost like a poem, or novel in verse, that I could turn to whenever I'm having a hard time, like when I'm down or feeling caged. I'm so glad for the opportunity to read this.
Amazing.
97/100

You know what's funny? When I noticed you'd put this up, I was listening to The Young Dubliners. . . And they have an instrumental song called Saoirse. XP

You know what else? The images you created with this, are the same as where I go in my head when I need to calm down. It's like those dreams that you have where you can fly. They always start in a big grass field and you're just running and you're so happy, even though there's nothing to make you that way. . .

That's what this reminded me of.

Great!