These Things, I'll Never Say - Comments

Oh Gracious, darling this was amazing.
Straigh up and seriously amazing.

I almost stopped reading after you mentioned the name Joseph (emotional attachment thing going on) but I'm tremendously glad I didn't. It wouldn't have done this amazing peice of work any justice if I'd quit right before everything became thicker and shown more of your brilliance. :)

The girl's emotions were very tangible and oddly, I found myself getting wrapped up in her character. Like these things were happening to me as well, or as if I were walking along with her. I'm probably sounding crazy, aha.

To wrap up this comment, the only complaint I have is that the layout was a little too bright. ): It hurt my eyes while I was reading so I was all squinty. > >

Amazing Job. :)

I can relate to this so well, it's mind boggling!

Okay, maybe not completely but this > He’s over there with her. I love him, and I could have had a chance with him. However, I’m a paranoid, overly-defensive weirdo. hit home. Made me gasp, literally, about how close to home it hit.

I wish I could catch him after school, tell him how I felt, apologize for my behaviour ... but I’ll never have the guts.
^nod quietly in agreement.

I just...I still can't believe this. It's as if you've taken my life, twisted it a little, and written this one shot.

These things I’ll never say. And the reasons that I'll never say them is because he would most probably laugh and I would most probably die. End of story.

You're an awesome, awesome writer .This managed to perk me up, even at four in the morning. x)

This was great, even with no dialogue. I felt really bad for the girl. The layout doesn't do justice for the story, however. The background color is just bad. Too bright. But the one-shot was really nice. Her emotions were very evident. Nice job. :)

First off, the title and the summary are great. Made me really want to read it.

Oh, wow...

I adore the internal conflict you put upon the main character. I think it's very relatable, even to those who are outgoing. You described her emotions so perfectly that I felt them myself. The way you described her love and interest for Joseph, made me as a reader love him too. (As creepy as that sounds.) I wanted so bad for Jodie to tell him her feelings that I could just feel the internal conflict not only being placed upon the character, but me. (As a reader) That's very hard to do when writing something, but this was so wonderful. Great job.

Thanks for entering my contest, and goodluck.<3

I'm the number one fan for stories with no dialogue. I really feel the connection to a teenager with to much to say, and not ever wanting to say them.

'Trust no one, is the only way I can survive high school.' Well, yes, yes it is the only way.

If this is based off Avril Lavigne's song "Things I'll Never Say" you thought about it in a much different sense.
It was kinda like Taylor Swift's "Tear Drops On My Guitar" meets "Things I'll Never Say".

Good emotion for something with no dialogue.
I liked this one, good work.
=)

This was so sad :(
But so powerful. I love how you didn't use dialgoue.
I always prefer stories with no dialogue.
Amazing <3

Oh, man, that's so sad :/ I really felt all the emotions in this. It's amazing <3

Aw, poor girl.

This was really good. I think pretty much everyone can relate to a teenager who has so many things to say, but won't because of society and embarrassment. It's a tune sang by almost everyone, I would guess.