Freedom to Starve - Comments

This story is just wow... You're portraying their emotions perfectly and I actually teared up a few times. Your writing style is just beautiful, I subscribed to the story and I honestly can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be looking forward for an update~

-Shamma

i love thissssssss<3
update soon pls?

Omg. This is so amazing. I absolutely adore this story now.

The Jimmy funeral scene, I cried. It was so emotional and intense and almost like you were standing there with them and watching everything happen. Incredible.

The exchanges between Brian and Zack are so vivid and real and just absolute love. It's remarkable and I can't get enough of it.

Already subscribed even before I read it. I just knew it was going to be great, and it is.

More soon!!!!<3{:

Jimmy stories, especially ones focusing on his death, are the hardest for me to read. It reminds me of when it happened and how everything seemed to just slow down. People came together on Mibba, offering condolences to their friends, because everybody on there knew someone who was affected by this. Same with when Paul Grey passed away. We're really a family on here, and that's why the stories about his death affect me to much. We should be a family, but not one who is comforting someone over another's death.

How Zacky and Brian react are like how I reacted to my grandparent's passings. I couldn't believe it - I knew they were sick and I knew it would happen, but I thought my mom was just joking. I should've known that she wouldn't joke over something so serious, though, just like how Brian's father hadn't been joking.

You've got Brian's character down to a T. He would be the one to immediately assume that it was a joke, that Jimmy was still alive and well. He had known Jimmy the longest, if I'm remembering correct, and I can't imagine how hard it would be to lose someone who you called your best friend like that. Disbelief would be the only thing to describe how anyone would feel after hearing that, I suppose. I know that I didn't believe my gramma was dead until the day of her funeral; I just kept hoping the whole thing was a joke. Sometimes, I wonder if all the guys are still hoping that it's a joke and that when they come back from tour, Jimmy's gonna pop up out of the bushes and scare the crap out of someone.

Overall, from what's been written and posted so far, I love it. I really love your writing style, how real the emotions feel, all of it. Fantastic job.

Awh, it almost made me cry.
Definitely sent a chill down my spine.
I know I'm going to love this<3
Xoxo. Tina.

This story gives a very real feeling to the whole thing
And I gotta admit I'm jealous of how well you write.
But I lvoe it for sure.

YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS ALREADY BUT I THOUGHT I'D COMMENT ANYWAY.

“Baby, I’m sorry I woke you,” he murmured as he leaned down and pressed a soft kiss to Zacky’s forehead.

^Cutest image ever, omguh. "murmured" is probably one of my favourite words to describe how someone speaks and kissing foreheads is just adorable in that sickeningly sweet kind of way.

I like the little added details like Suzie's breast cancer; it adds a more real feel to the whole thing and kind of puts into perspective just how distraught he must have appeared.

I'm really looking forward to this 'cause I know it already and I luh the idea and I wanna read the rest of it. now. XD -impatient-