so, i think this story is pretty much badass. i really dig the plot and how the characters are, and you write it very well, i don't think i've seen many, if any, mistakes. keep updatin, i'll definitely keep reading. *SUBSCRIBE*
I am replying to DownForTheCount on here so that people know I am NOT that pathetic, and I don't care if you un-invite me to your sleepover!! :) but I'll still put you in the story, as I said before you pyscho. thank you for the comment anyways though
BAM. Agreed with RockMyWorldA7x about Adrianna. Glad you updated. Is it sad I like fan-fic drama stories like these because they make me feel better about myself? As well as the fact they have A7x in them. ANYWAYS, I still love the story. Keep writing or I will uninvite you to my sleepover. >:O
Adrianna=HUGE FUCKING BITCH!! And I think the guys could have been a little bit nicer to her. It wasn't fair how they were treating her. All in all, this was an excellent update and I cannot wait for the next. Poor Alessa.
I'm likin this story A LOT! :D I honestly don't want you to end it so quickly but if you reaally feel that u don't have much time to update anymore, then u could end it in a few more chapters. cuz the way u wrote it sounded like there was gonna be at least 10 more chapters. But whatever u decide ill understand :)
Awww, dont end it D: but if you really want to then you have to at least tell us who she ends up with. Personally im a Brian girl, but I want her to be with Matt...
I think this is one of the best chapters thus far. You could almost imagine that terrible headache she had during chemistry. And not to mention, that fight scene was awesome! I hope there will be more soon. =D
I think this is one of the best chapters thus far. You could almost imagine that terrible headache she had during chemistry. And not to mention, that fight scene was awesome! I hope there will be more soon. =D