January 8th, 2012 at 06:18am
Aw, so it's officially over now. :( But I liked the ending; it was a bit bittersweet, but it was also amazing as well. You made it more realistic with giving it that ending, instead of what, let's be honest here, most of us readers wanted, and for them to end up together again. lol.
But anyways, um... you did an amazing job with this. :) You're a truly amazing writer, and I hope to see you writing more again in the future. :) And even though this is over, I'm staying subscribed. Because that is just how much I loved this short story. :)
Once again, amazing job. So be proud. :D
Sucks that Nick and Avery couldn't be together.
But maybe it truly was for the best.
Maybe Nick and Avery truly weren't meant to be together.
But, even though things didn't end the way I wanted them to, I KNOW they were.
I KNOW that Avery will always long for Nick, deep down in her heart, and the same for Nick with Avery.