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  • jo_lauren

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    This was beautiful.
    Sucks that Nick and Avery couldn't be together.
    But maybe it truly was for the best.
    Maybe Nick and Avery truly weren't meant to be together.
    But, even though things didn't end the way I wanted them to, I KNOW they were.
    I KNOW that Avery will always long for Nick, deep down in her heart, and the same for Nick with Avery.
    January 8th, 2012 at 06:18am
  • Nanook

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    Aw, so it's officially over now. :( But I liked the ending; it was a bit bittersweet, but it was also amazing as well. You made it more realistic with giving it that ending, instead of what, let's be honest here, most of us readers wanted, and for them to end up together again. lol.
    But anyways, um... you did an amazing job with this. :) You're a truly amazing writer, and I hope to see you writing more again in the future. :) And even though this is over, I'm staying subscribed. Because that is just how much I loved this short story. :)
    Once again, amazing job. So be proud. :D
    June 6th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • Minnesota518

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    This is amazing.
    June 6th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • Cherry Pez

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    Wow. i'm speechless. i know i said it before, but this story is beautiful.
    There are real tears in my eyes. my heart is broken for Nick. the girl of his dreams- married to someone else. i can't even imagine. i wish so hard this had a happy ending for Nick and Avery, but i understand.
    And i can't even lie right now, i'm so jealous of your writing skills. you manage to get so much meaning into so few words. i'm blown away. you are an incredible writer.
    This story was unbelievably wonderful. great job!
    June 6th, 2011 at 01:43am
  • Cherry Pez

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    i just found this story and it is ah-mazing! your diction is beautiful.
    there aren't many other stories on here as well written as this is.
    please update soon! i can't wait to find out what happens.
    June 5th, 2011 at 10:41pm
  • eternally.forever;;

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    I just finished reading chapter four and I'm in love with the chapters, it's like really good:)

    Please update soon:), definitely will subscribe to this:)
    April 21st, 2011 at 02:21am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :) Great job with it...
    Aw, it was a tad sad, though, seeing Nick disappointed and all... but I liked how they ran into each other. :) Hm... I wonder if he'll actually go to the wedding?
    Oh, and I think they are meant to be together. ;)
    Can't wait for the next update! :D
    April 13th, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :) Aw, so Nick was Avery's first... lover, as she put it. lol. That's cute. Hm... I wonder who she loves more, though? I have a feeling the answer is Nick... but that's just a guess. ;) Can't wait for more of this, seriously! It's really good. :D

    So... White Knuckles... I've read your stories for a while now, and I can't help but think we never introduced ourselves to each other. :( I'm Jenna. :) And I've just added this extra part because... well, for why I said. And to let you know that if you ever want to talk to someone on here, I'm here. :) But you're probably busy with other stuff and so... it's okay if you don't. Just thought I should offer.

    But you've been an amazing writer, with all of your stories. I hope that you find more inspiration soon to write and update some more of them. :)
    April 2nd, 2011 at 04:00am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Hm... so Nick was once with her, huh? Interesting. I wonder if they split with unreccognized feels? Wait... is that the term I want to use? lol. It sounds good, so I'll keep it there. Anyways, overall, great update. I originally thought this was just going to be an original, but I like how you've gotten Nick involved. :) Well, it is kind of an original considering he's not famous... but, besides that part... I like how he's in the story. :) You're really doing a great job with this. Can't wait for the next update! :D
    March 23rd, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • stormy nights

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    awww... right now i wish they were still together even though you have only wirtten 2 chapters ;)
    update ASAP :)
    March 23rd, 2011 at 01:07pm
  • Nanook

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    Hm... I like this. It's sounding like a really good idea. :) Can't wait for the other parts of it; to see what happens. Your stories never cease to amaze me. :) Can't wait for the next part! :D
    Definitely... subscribed! :D
    March 3rd, 2011 at 10:16pm