Love Story - Comments

I'm not a fan of stories with lyrics in them, and that's one of the few things I didn't like about this story. The description (or lack thereof) is probably my favorite things; oneshots have lovely flat characters and when someone is able to pull that off without it seeming annoying, I love it. The story pulls from the lyrics well, so it's quite cute, but the lyrics irked me.

That was a really nice read. <3
I love that song and I liked how you made the story match with it. :)

I love that song so I absolutely loved this story, it was really moving but also simple which I liked. Although I don't really like the layout and the lyrics being put into the summary, it was a very interesting story. :)

I love how the lyrics were incorperated into the story. This is very touching and emotional. It was a bit too much like the song for my taste, I think you should have added a twist on to it or something so it wasn't just the story of the song. Other then that this was very well written and I enjoyed reading it. A very uplifting one shot. (: <3

I like the layout :] and its a really good song!
i also like how you got the lyrics in, thats good
I like the scenery. the balcony was probably really pretty :]
haha i like that, gossip girl. good analogy
ohhh hot boys :] who doesnt love them?
and if hes 19, and hes too old, how old is she?
of course, her dad wont let her see him :/
but i really like how you got this setting in modern times!
i think thats really cool
aww its cute that they are going to make it work :]
thats cute. how the whole world kinda disappears when they're together
her dad found them? oh no! not good. and not fair :/
its not Jodie's fault that their fathers are rivals
oh shes 16. so i guess its kind of illegal, unfortunatley :/
her dad is a jerk! now he is going to set her up with someone else? what the hell?
aww shes going to wait that long for him, thats sweet :]
that's sad. he forgot about her :[ poor jodie
HE DIDNT FORGET ABOUT HER! :D i knew it couldn't be true
great. hes not freaking there. ugh
awww! he proposed :] <3 i knew that would hapen
i mean ive heard the song, so its kidna predictiable :/
but i mean you cant write a song fic without being predictable
this was such a sweet, cute story.
It made me be in a happy mood. wonderful job :]