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  • Queen of the Clouds

    Queen of the Clouds (4955)

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    Awwww that's sad :( I do think you could have made their relationship status evident a bit earlier in the story, and the setting. And also, I think the emotions could have been a bit more intense. But I liked the ending to it. Very sweet.
    August 16th, 2010 at 07:48am
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    Way to make me cry. It was really good girly.
    August 7th, 2010 at 09:35pm
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