Eep. That was....sigh.... adorable. Refreshing. Beautiful. I thought it would end there, being sad after singing at her mother's grave. Chris arriving was a bit awkward and strange, I have to admit. But when he got to talking, the idea set in and I just loved it. The idea, the hope those bugs brought her... he coming up to her was a pure miracle. She was free again- and lots of people need to be able to feel that after a love one is gone. I don't think I saw any mistakes, and it went well with the picture, as well as the layout. The idea was completely foreign to me but you got me gushing over Chris after. Only criticism I can offer is to define things a little bit better, because the beginning took a long while and confused me, and Chris' introduction was a little odd as well. But you did great! 94/100
That was....sigh.... adorable. Refreshing. Beautiful. I thought it would end there, being sad after singing at her mother's grave. Chris arriving was a bit awkward and strange, I have to admit. But when he got to talking, the idea set in and I just loved it. The idea, the hope those bugs brought her... he coming up to her was a pure miracle. She was free again- and lots of people need to be able to feel that after a love one is gone. I don't think I saw any mistakes, and it went well with the picture, as well as the layout. The idea was completely foreign to me but you got me gushing over Chris after. Only criticism I can offer is to define things a little bit better, because the beginning took a long while and confused me, and Chris' introduction was a little odd as well. But you did great!
94/100