Don't Forget - Comments

Thnaks! I know it was very lacking in my own input, but I don't know, I just felt everything in the chapters were so important I couldn't leave anything out! (even though I already wrote about it haha)

Omg. So in the book and movie, that was one of my favorite scenes. So much information that brought everything together and then so much emotion too. I think you did an amazing job using the right descriptions beyond the book and movie. I was even reading the Sirius parts in his voice, haha.
That was a great chapter.

hmm I'd say this is a mix of good and so-so depending on how you look at it. in interest overall, it's good but for originality, it's only so-so because excerpts were taken from the book and movie. write more!!!

Is this gonna some how be a Fred/Andi thing? that would be cuuuute.
and and and I loved this. I love the cute Fred parts, the happiness with Quidditch and of course, the bit of inner conflict with Estelle.

I do love this- but someone needs to get CURSED! So Andi's ending up with Fred then? hmm. I wish the mushiness between Estelle and Sirius lasted longer. Did they even kiss? Bit of spelling errors, and I think committee has two "m"s in it but ah well. UPDATE!!!

Ahhhhh, noo not a cliffhanger please please updateee soooooon
i can't wait long :)
its amazing
hmmmmm ahhhh updateee pleaseeee :)

I totally teared up at Estelle and Sirius. Omg. And just it's so frustrating when they don't know the truth yet, you're just like "hurry and figure out the truth!" ahah :D

I love love LOVE this story!!!!

OMG WAS THAT A SIRIUS AND ANDI MEETING?! omg omgogmlfjadslj <3

This is going rather slow-paced. I wish you'd write more quickly! I really don't feel like Estelle is excited enough considering Sirius finally broke out. She should be jumping for bloody joy and not being so...whatever it is she's being. It's very upsetting. Update soon!!!!! <3

I like it.. Keep up the good work :D

I hope she pieces everything together and knows he's a good guy tho.

@ZombieMuffinzAttack!
lol!! You'll just have to see.

Hey hey hey... Is this a Fred kinda thing? Grrr, at first i thought it was a Draco thing.. I'd hoped that it was a Harry thing... Just because you just don't see any of those around like you used to.. :( anyhow, am loving the story, can't wait for the Father-Daughter first encounter

Can't wait for Sirius!!!!!! <3

So so so cute! :]

@celestrial_royalty
WOW! I'm so happy to see someone this interested in my story!! I love that you had that much to say about it! Thank you so much!

I will say that Estelle does pull Andi aside on the first day of classes, although I did not put any dialogue between them as I had originally planned! You're basically right. I mean, you've made some very valid points. I'm so sorry I didn't include the 'meeting' of Andi and Harry.

Hopefully, the characters can correct some of their mistakes ~eventually~. (I can't give anything away, you'll just have to read!!)

Thanks everyone!!

I totally love how Andi will stick up for her friends :]

This is going to be a very unfair comment, but Estelle is NOT paying attention to Andi! Where in the entire first semester has she pulled her daughter aside to talk to her?! She left to teach at Hogwarts to ease her own guilt, leaving her daughter almost alone for two years, and now- oh she's content with being able to watch her in classes (Yipee) but that doesn't make Andi feel any better, does it? As much as I love that Harry has her, it's not fair that Andi does not.

And oh, don't even let me get STARTED on her kissing Remus- doesn't she feel GUILTY with how things left off with Sirius?! No matter how long it's been or how hard, BETRAYAL IS BETRAYAL. Strictly friendship my ass, Sirius is going through hell and beyond, and she BETRAYS him on top of all that! Isn't his life miserable enough without MORE that he doesn't know about and has to find out later?! Honestly, it's ridiulous and unfair.

Now that my rant is, for the most part, over, what about Andi meeting Harry? I was expecting a happy, excited and cheerful meeting that never came! The "I'm your god-sister and I've been DYING to meet you!!!!!!!!!" part. I really was looking forward to that.

On an ending note, I can't wait for more! This has been my favorite story for a long time (or rather, Maybe Memories was- I have to say it got a little more disappointing near the end. All I got from it was a bunch of bickering and loneliness and darkness. Estelle was unfair to Sirius- he was jealous, and if he wasn't, she would never have been with him in the first place! How could she blame him for being himself?! She was the main reason why his life was so dark before imprisonment and I hold her ompletely responsible. Even while she's also sad, its her JOB to make sure he's okay. And she didn't. He was far, far from happy even before the death of the Potters, and very, very lonely.

I can't wait for moreee. :)