Lips as Sweet as Sugar - Comments

Hey Bethany! Like the story.......ok so i would watch on grammar mistakes and maybe a little more exaggeration try not to make to much "outta subject I don't care" talk. The beginning had that but you exaggerated a litle on it so datz gd. Use these tips nd u will b gd to go!!

GO JUSTIN BIEBER! GO JUSTIN BIEBER! I <3 U SOOO MUCH 4 WRITING THIS STORY BETHY I MUST MUST MUST SUBSCRIBE :D AND I WILL ALSO KEEP COMMENTING AND I WILL TELL YOU HOW TO MAKE IT BETTER #1 FAN OF THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!