August 27th, 2011 at 01:19am
Awhhhhh :3
This.Was.So.Cute.
*w*
Not your best work?
I don't think so.
Actually, the one of the reasons why I love doing these types of contests is because throughout the year, I can see how a writer matures and grows up while writing,
and here is a perfect example of what I mean.
Okay, so usually age differences are just sex sex sex, not that I mind or anything... >.>
But I mean, I was hoping for something a little different.
This was fantastic,
and it made me smile the entire way through.
The emotion flowing from this story was amazing,
and I absolutely adore this.
I really do.
You did a fantastic job<3
Good luck!
xo
I noticed off the bat that there were a few errors throughout the story. They weren't anything major or anything that disrupted the flow but I would suggest just giving things a closer look next time. :) Overall, I could tell that you worked hard on this; you did a good job fleshing our your characters and giving them background information. Thanks so much for entering it in my contest! :)