That was a really good entry! Lily was just like Ginny which I liked:) and I liked how she wasn't perfect and had troubles dating. She also had insecurities - she was a really relateable character. Maybe just add a little more emotion (especially towards the end when they kissed - cute!)
Lily was just like Ginny which I liked:)
and I liked how she wasn't perfect and had troubles dating.
She also had insecurities - she was a really relateable character.
Maybe just add a little more emotion (especially towards the end when they kissed - cute!)
Thanks for joining! :)