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I enjoyed reading this. I don't like the abrupt ending you had there, but I did enjoy it. I don't like the layout; grays and reds together don't really work, in my opinion. I love the picture you had in there, however. I wanna know if you're gonna add anything else to this.

I absolutely loved the descriptions in this!
It was sad, though. D: What happened to her mother and father!
The layout for this was amazing, as well.
It was just so beautifully written!
I cannot wait to find out what she had seen, though.
This was amazing. (:

This looks like it's going to be a really
good story, there's a bit of mystery
which I am intrigued by and I'm eager
to read more about your characters.
It's pretty much, very well written.
Great job,xoxo.

I loooooooooooove it. o_______o So intriguing and beautifully crafted. Also, sweet layout.

Gah, cliffhanger xD This was a really nice read. I could see everything so clearly, so great job with that. I loved how you wrote this-- it was so flow-y and wonderful and I just love your writing skills, man. <3 I want to know what's going to happen next!

I like it- A LOT. I'll be back later with Moma and give you a real review. :) But for now this will have to do: good one. Hope that lasts you the next few hours.

WHAT WAS TEH SIGHT IN FRONT OF HER?!

That picture, is adorable.
But because of that picture I kept thinking the main character was a dog. >.<
And I'm pretty sure she wasn't.

But it was adorable.
Aside from the deaths and what not.
It held a real tragedy to it and I just really enjoyed what I read.
The descriptions were intense and heartwrenching, and if Roza was a dog I would hug her.

Ooooh. I really like the layout!
The colors just go.

“ The days where a sheet of clouds blocked the sun's heat from making me sweat and a light breeze graced my exposed flesh. The lush green growth below me tickled my cheeks and limbs. I shut my eyes, closing off my sense of sight and relying only on touch.”
I love the description and imagery in that paragraph.

“Orange and yellow and gold engulfed me as the flames performed their dance of destruction.” That is an awesome line!! I love how you called it the “dance of destruction”.

Her life is so sad, but this piece is absolutely beautiful!
It’s really amazing <3

I like it. You did a good job with the descriptions and I could really feel like I was there. nice job! :)
p.s. i love the pic for your story.

i agree, the banner was adorableee! :D and so was your writing, you write well....and this has great potential

Interesting! I wonder why Crazy Cathy was always so intense about the kids...

I like the words "dance of destruction". So poetic :)

I love the banner, it's really pretty.
The story itself has a lot of emotion in it, and I could feel how she felt throughout what you wrote.
I like the cliffhanger and I'll really like to see where this goes!

Oh gosh, this was so perfect.

I loved the layout and especially the picture in the summary. It was beautiful.

This left me wanting more, I was on the edge of my seat! Literally!

I think it has so much potential, I couldn't even find somethign to critisize.

More soon?

Good job!

Okay, first, I'm in love with the layout and the picture. The dog/wolf/whatever kind of canine it is is so freakin' adorable! I wanna give it a huge hug <3
Second, loving the cliffhanger there! It was so intense reading the flashback. My heart was racing in my chest. Everything was written so clearly here. I can't wait to see what happens next (: <3

How dare you leave me hanging like that! :O

Update quickly. :)

Alright, I love you for writing about a place in Alberta. Everyone always forgets the poor little province. And since I live here, it's awesome. xD

The first and second paragraphs were my favorite. The description and imagery was amazing.

I'm really excited to see what the noise was coming from. I have a feeling it's from the dog in the banner, but I'm curious.

Very nicely written. :D

-subbing-

Sounds really good so far. I'm so jealous of the main character I would give anything to live in a cottage in the country. Haha. Write more soon yeah?
Oh and the picture of the dog is just adorable. :)

Great cliffhanger! I really want to know what she saw now.
Orange and yellow and gold engulfed me as the flames performed their dance of destruction. - that line was amazing and so full of emotion, I love it.
I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait for more.
It all was written so wonderfully and clear that I could see everything like I was there - her mother screaming, the flames dancing and I've built up an image of her aunt too. (a wacky one, at that xD)
I'm definitley subscribing, this was beyond amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Great job. <3