August 11th, 2010 at 04:45pm
Love this =)
Favourite bit-
'My words would have been as venomous and as sharp as ever, if somewhat tangled on my tongue from all the liquor. Whip me up a storm and I’ll ride it; let myself get carried away as per usual.'
Very well worded.
I loved how regretful he was but at the end the smirk on his face seemed to prove that he wasn't going to change either.
Well constructed dude =) xx
Very Very Very well written.
I like how you worked the lyrics into the song without quoting them exactly.
And the end where he was not at all happy about how his night was, but he layed on the couch and smiled?
brilliant
And I loved how your last line was "Someone give me some therapy"
First contest entry=amazing:)