Awww the letter was so sad! But so adorable! I like the short chapters... I think you could make In These Arms and this one the same story though if you wanted to. It works well this way too though.
Just a note, chapters... I think it was 4 and 5 were the same. Just in case you didn't notice.
Just a note, chapters... I think it was 4 and 5 were the same. Just in case you didn't notice.