September 21st, 2010 at 11:36pm
My comment is late, I apologize. I meant to get to it earlier, but it just would not happen.
Anyhoo. I read this because this is my absolute favorite A7X song. I loved the lyrics. :D
I didn't expect this song to work well with a him breaking up with her, you know? I thought she would break up with him. But it worked surprisingly well. Good job.
Best wishes with the contest. I love the picture at the top, Matt looks... indescribable, but good.
I don't really like guy POV stories, because it usually gets killed, but this was good. So excellnt.
Haha, sorry bout that ;D
I really like the idea of you adding in the lyrics, because I think it goes well with it.
I wish this was a longer chapter, I can't wait to see the next chapter<3