Unholy Confessions - Comments

  • AliceHumanSacrifice.

    AliceHumanSacrifice. (100)

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    M. Shadows = AHHHHHHH.
    Haha, sorry bout that ;D
    I really like the idea of you adding in the lyrics, because I think it goes well with it.
    I wish this was a longer chapter, I can't wait to see the next chapter<3
    September 21st, 2010 at 11:36pm
  • stencil heart.

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    My comment is late, I apologize. I meant to get to it earlier, but it just would not happen.
    Anyhoo. I read this because this is my absolute favorite A7X song. I loved the lyrics. :D
    I didn't expect this song to work well with a him breaking up with her, you know? I thought she would break up with him. But it worked surprisingly well. Good job.
    Best wishes with the contest. I love the picture at the top, Matt looks... indescribable, but good.
    I don't really like guy POV stories, because it usually gets killed, but this was good. So excellnt.
    August 13th, 2010 at 05:32am
  • courier six

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    Okay, first things first.

    She already knows it bad - I believe it should be it's.

    Nao, this was, I dunno. Cute? A breakup isn't cute, haha. But, I liked this. It's short and to the point<3

    Good luck in the contest. ^.^

    Oh yeah, something I forgot to mention. I EFFING LURVE EET CAUSE YOU WRITE FROM THE GUYS' POV. EPIC WIN. <3<3<3<3
    August 9th, 2010 at 08:15am