ARRGGGHHH!!! WAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!??!?!?!?!? you must write more!!!! GRRR, i'm telling EVERYBODY to keep writing lately...GRRR.....write moooorrrrreee Love, Sammii
"It was a comforting thought to her, to be able to feel the cool rain against her hot skin and to feel something come from the sky other than the burning and harsh heat. " I LOVED that part. this is actually really good and I'm thoroughly interested as to what will happen in the story. Keep writing.
things are starting slow, but I'm sure it will get better soon.