*new reader of both stories* dude - I've been reading this all day pretty much non - stop. You're too good a writer. I love them - really original on a fairly obvious theme :D:D You're awesome! Lauren's gonna go apeshit on Zacky ain't she? But other than that, she's gonna be just peachy keen right? More more more!! *subscribes*
And now I must go stalk your stories some more ;)