What They Don't Know Won't Hurt Them - Comments

look who is finally commenting....that'd be me. you are welcome, i'm pretty awesome.

oh boy pheebs, you are one dirty girl. this story isn't for kids, that's for sure.

i think you did a great job of building the story up and giving his background. i like getting in jordan's head, i like knowing what is going through his head all the way up to the situation with the mrs. i dont like how that played out (you know how i am with marriages lol) but it was sooo good, and so dramatic, i couldn't believe it happened because, well, poor mark--he's such a nice guy and good friend...and jordan....well, hes a kid. he should know better, yeah. but when he 18 and horny and being seduced, you can't necessarily blame him. i blame her. poor mark married a whore.

I loved living with the Recchi's. For the most part it kept me out of trouble because, while it wasn't a formal rule, there was no bringing women back to the house; there were the kids to think of.--i'd love to see him with his own kids someday...he seems very mature when he talks about the kids. he'd straighten up real fast...it'd be sweet. :)

Mark grabbed me and hugged me. Not one of those one armed deals, a real hug. The kind I gave my brother's when I hadn't seen them in a long time. "Thanks man. I knew I could count on you. You really are part of our family you know."-awww, poor mark :( i wonder what is gonna happen when he finds out. how long is that going to be?

"Who's the cougar?" Sid asked. I ignored Sid's questions and glared at Max warning him that the conversation was private even though we were having it in a room full of guys. Sid lost interest, and hit the showers,--this sid sounds like a cutie. is he spoken for?? ;)

Okay, so the ENTIRE sex scene between him and the Mrs. ....SOOOOO hot. Very, very naughty, but hot none-the-less. I'm not so sure i believe it's a one time thing, but if he respects his friend as much as he says, and feels as guilty as he says, then i would like to hope that it's a one and done. a lot of drama and a lot to pull the readers in. i cant necessarily say i'm proud of you for this elicit affair, haha, but it's ridiculously well written, and that's a fact.

i can't wait to see what happens next. :)

hey. update this.
before i pounce you.

ahhhh!!!!! jordan!
wow.
i love that you just jumped right into it in the first chapter rather than opting for a slow boring start, thanks for that :) also, thanks for some hot sex scenes right away ;) i loved that also hhaha.
anyways, you did an amazing job with this.
i knew that you would write jordan well, but this blew me away.
i dont blame him for giving in to her...hes a guy. hes a guy that was standing there while a half naked woman was convincing him to do her. like i said, i dont blame him. but kudos to him for avoiding it for as long as he did.
cant wait to see what sort of drama this causes!!!
more sooooooon phoebe <3

Holy shit what a start to the story!!! that was very intense

Oooh, love it so far. I hope the cougar doesn't corrupt sweet, innocent (k, maybe not) Jordan too much.

AMAZING!

I thought that this was an incredible start and I have to admit that I'm slightly disappointed by a certain comment that was made that all but just repeated what you had written in the summary. It was quite clear that they either didn't read the chapter at all or they didn't understand a damn thing that you'd written. It's disappointing that someone can't fully appreciate the complexity and the maturity it takes to write and understand stories that transcend the normal fluffy, almost high schoolish relationships and lives portrayed in a lot of work on this site.

I loved how you described Jordy and Rex's relationship and how Mark mentored him through a lot of experiences in his life. From how to handle himself with the press, the puck sluts (Can I say sluts on here?) and the general public. Awesome words of advice from someone who's been in the league for a long time and has had to learn these things himself. And then we moved into the 'work' side of things and how Mark was a tutor of sorts when it came to certain aspects of Jordy's game. It's a really nice almost father/son relationship they had going on. And I don't blame Rex had all for asking Jordy to keep an eye on his family.

Love seeing the little snippets of family life. The kids seem sweet and cute and it's nice to see that they're taking so easily to Jordan, especially when it must be hard to be away from daddy for so long. Now Lex is another story...she's complex as hell. Which is what real women (especially mature ones) are really like. To see him comforting her in her lonliness when she's missing her man to then feeling slightly uncomfortable with her subtle advances was very realistic! And you know how I crave realism.

I have to say: Max has impeccable taste in women. What a smart man that Talbot is turning out to be. I hope that he's crazy in love and that she's 'the one'. SIGH. Anyhow, I loved how you wrote my lover. Just how I think he'd talk and just the exact things I think he'd say, starting with the comment about 'if that was just teasing, I'm still a virgin'. LOL. Typical Max. And although I don't condone affairs, for the sake of making this a hot and scandelous story, I hope Jordy takes Superstar's advice. And I hope we get to see Max's girl at some point in time. She sounds awesome! ;)

Okay, that smut was exceptionally hot. It was raw and dirty and perfectly written. That Lex is a bad girl! Although something is making me believe that she wasn't that happy and fulfilled with Rex is she turned to Jordy that quickly for physical relief.....

Definitely looking forward to more!

different. ineresting....
want to find out what happens next....!

She seduced him! Bad Lex! She's a married woman. How could he resist her.

Anywho, can't wait for more.

PRETTY MUCH DYING FOR MORE OF THIS *COUGH COUGH*
loooooved ittttt. hello children, say hi to your new daddy!
bahahaha. i seriously am so ready for another chapter! sexy sexy!
love love love.
more please!
<333

That was such a good start to this story. I mean, I don't really blame Jordan. There's not much he could do about it.
Anyway, I love this and I'm excited for more (:

Sorry for the typos. The first is supposed to be with and the second is supposed to be but

Wowserz. That was interesting. Haha I kinda liked it. I don't really know what to feel.
One: I really missed ur writing
And two: you did a good job wig making something new and different. Three: I am slightly mad at Jordan but she did seduce him. And he is a guy. Hutu think I'm only mad because I'm not one for the whole wife cheating on husband with a younger guy thing. Haha and I'm slightly hoping it as a one time thing what happened between them two... But come on. Who am I kidding?
What's going to happen next?

Holy crap!
What an amazing start! I totally loved it. Jordan not being the one that is chasing after her, I like that. And he tried to stay away as long as he could. I kinda feel bad for Jordan, 'cause I have a feeling this is just the very beginning of something that is gonna go oh so bad. But I LOVE it!!!
More soon please?