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Abbi-Girl Ellen (100)

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I like the concept behind this story, I think a little work on how it flows would perfect it
(also a few typos need correcting)

September 4th, 2010 at 05:45pm
Dawnflower (100)

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The story is really interesting. Keep up the good work.

August 18th, 2010 at 05:18am
Makebox (100)

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Really like the story so far. Never read anythinglike it before! Please update soon. Great Job!!!

August 10th, 2010 at 11:34pm

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