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  • Abbi-Girl Ellen

    Abbi-Girl Ellen (100)

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    I like the concept behind this story, I think a little work on how it flows would perfect it
    (also a few typos need correcting)
    September 4th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • Dawnflower

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    The story is really interesting. Keep up the good work.
    August 18th, 2010 at 05:18am
  • Makebox

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    Really like the story so far. Never read anythinglike it before! Please update soon. Great Job!!!
    August 10th, 2010 at 11:34pm
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