Oh, the way you write your stories nearly takes my breathe away. Gerard seems quite helpless, but not in the typical "oh help me" way. In the sense that he does need someone to aid him in seeing life for the way it should be. And Frank so far is doing a pretty good job(: <i>Gerard didn't know what it was about him, but Frank made him feel like he might be human. He knew in the back of his head he couldn't fuck this up.</i>
That made the small smile on my face grow ten times. Frank is wonderful and I cannot wait for updates. I just know it's going to get better, no matter the little craziness of Gerard. Whoop.
Old aging women like that are creepy. xD Lolz Gerard. I'm just going to sit quietly and wait for the next update...... Just coz it's not good enough just one update of this, y'know.....
This is so incredibly different. I love the way you write, it's just so, unique. I love this. I love anything you write. And if you ever quit this, I'll make sure you have a crunchy butt for the rest of your life. (: I mean, your hubby and I have been writing this one story for a long time and no one reads it. I don't care because I love seeing where we're going with it. So don't let anything get to you. Just give it time. I really do love this though, hun. And I'm subscribing. <3 More?
Please don't quit on this story, love; it's too brilliant! :D
I agree with the comment above; I'm so sorry for not commenting for the past chapters, but I have been reading, swear! It's just school has been kickin' my ass and I've had to rush off to finish homework and whatnot...
But please don't quit! I loved this chapter; even though Gerard went slightly psychotic for a while there. XD Glad Frankie could handle it, I would've been scared. You're writing is beautiful and this story is as well.
awwwh, you make me feel bad for not commenting because i know exactly what you mean! I'm sorry! I HAVE been reading and i DO like it, but i'm busy, y'know? But yeah, i will DEFINITELY start commenting again if it'll mean that you'll keep this story because i really do love it.
And this chapter was to fucking die for. It was really beautiful, actually. How Frank saw Gerard's flaws and was just like 'What the hell, every body's fucked up'. I also felt sorry for Gerard after he hurt Frank- he seemed really freaked out- and poor Frank D:
I hate the thought of Frankie being in pain, dont you? :(
Was Gerard experiencing like a really weird high or something? WAS THAT SHIT LACED!? OH NO D:
Lol. But yeah. I love this story :3 so please dont stop writing it, it makes my fucking day when i see that you updated :)
Naughty Frank, giving Gerard a joint...haha! Although, a joint's a joiint, nothing really harmful. I loved that update, I dunno, they actually seem like proper teenagers...per say! :D
I hope you know that everytime I see you update this story, I have these tiny spasms out of excitment :D It's so sweet the way Frank can just read Gerard, and even though he can't tell what he's feeling completely, he still knows :)))) So carry on...please!!!!! And by the way, me and your story have set a date for the wedding :P xx
LOL Gerard randomly starts catching stuff on fire in some random boy's room? That. Is. ADORABLE.
I cant wait to see what Gee and Frankie do on their night out on the town. :0 I cant wait for the next update- im already pretty much in love with this story :3
I was like, woah when Gerard started burning the paper, although that was be pretty beautiful to see, flames are somewhat beautiful. Aww wifey, I'm sorry you're single again. I still love you though <3 :D The update was cute, really cute, and I love this!! xD
I agree, Romeo and Juliet FTW!!!! :D Bhaha, I love the slowness...it's like practically normal...although asides some few idiots..¬.¬ That report was a total bummer weren't it? People need to grow up ¬.¬