Remember It Rains - Comments

Amazing story! That was probably one of the most saddest yet amazing t endings I've seen in a long while. Again, amazing story!

OH I would love if you helped me. It is difficult for to write in English without thinking about it too much in the end I twist around my sentences and tenses. It doesn't help much that my computer has the auto-correcter for grammar and spelling messing it up more than it already is.

I love the title, first of all. It fits very well with how you wrote the story. It was heart felt, and I enjoyed it.

Same as with the other story, though. I noticed some mistakes such as "singed" instead of "sung" etc. It was great though, honestly. Don't think I'm being a bitch here, I'm just trying to help you improve even more! Maybe if you have a friend edit it before you post it? That may help there, I'd be willing to help you!

Great work, you're an excellent writer.