I dont fall for arrogant football players so why do i feel like I'm falling for him?! - Comments

The story's name is too long. (Won't make readers like it much) and I want to ask; would you want me to be your beta? I'd really like to help with the spelling and I'd also like to do a layout for your story if you'd want :)

Just some tips- your title isn't right. it should be I Don't Fall for Arrogant Football Players so Why Do I Feel like I'm Falling for Him?

First, that's really long. And no "Cristono Roberts story" at the end. You could get banned for that.

awwwwwwwwwwwwww noooooooooooooooo...................cant wait to see wat happens nxt..hp they end up tgather

amazing amzaing..post soooooon

cooooooool chap loved it

likedddd it..yea postt soon!

I havent read all of it but the story but it it has an interesting story line, I'm gonna try to be constructive.
The speech is hard to follow because it isnt seperated and maybe you could do with more paragraphs just to break it up a bit.
Some of your punctuation is wrong, you miss out spaces after it
Also the links in your writing might be better if they were moved, to the authors note or maybe as the links you can click on.

nicee...i liked it..i wonder y am i the only one whose commented up till now!! post soon!! i want moreof cris & vic..!!

okay firstly the subject is great.i like wat ur writing but make it in paragraphs its very neccsessary & make the conversations more clearer! And pls post soon.