What Might Have Been - Comments

Just wondering if there's a sequel to this...great story!

tears. TEARS. this was so heartbreaking. <333 love it.

Omg I just realized you wrote this. I love looking at contest entries and honestly this is my favourite one. Whenever I think of a story to write my mind travels back to this one and how fantastic it is.

holy shit, sam..
this was so good..
ouch! my heart is seriously splintering into pieces right now..
that is so heartbreaking.. but he's right..
she deserves to be happy.
:'(
ouch.. i think i might cry. :( :(
that was really really great.. even if it was so heartbreaking

amazing absolutely amazing you have such a descriptive way of write that just draws the reader in right away. this story was so sad and intense and lovely and just wow.

amazing - absolutely. it's not often that something i read brings me to tears.

That was FANTASTIC. Totally beat the pants off my story! Congrats on winning the contest - I am sure it will not be the last.

dude.
this is probably one of the best one shots I've ever seen.
amazing job!
:)

This is amazing.
I almost cried, not going to lie. The whole story broke my heart, but it was so good.
Great Job:)

You have nothing to worry about, this was beyond amazing. Very detailed. I loved it. I wish you all the best with it.

I can't lie, i teared up, your writings so descriptive, you just paint a picture with it. Awesome Story

Holy shit that was one intense one shot!!! Wow I truly loved it

I really liked the oneshot it kind of reminded me of the the one story you wrote except in that story they got preggo and DIDN"T break up.
btw.
I really liked it. like REALLY REALLY liked it.

you're def. a shoe-in to win the contest, at least in my opinion.

This was an amazing story and I hope you take the next thing I'm about to say in the context that it is intended, but it doesn't feel over. I think it's beautiful and emotional and grown up and I love it...But if your really wanted to, this could be a full story. Needless to say I'd love a full story, but that's just my opinion.

I want to put a plug in there for Jordan. He's so funny. I loved that.

Thank you for writing mature fan fiction. It's perfect for us girls who are mature enough to get life, but immature enough to wish it was us that Sidney was in love with (or in my case Jordan or both, whatever).

This was beautiful. I hope you win that contest. You sure deserve it.

Hey. Ok wow I can't believe that was your first ever one-shot! That's crazy!!!! That was so amazing I wanted to cry! If only it wasn't a one shot...
Can I just say you have a real talent and I admire your writing and look forward to any updates every day. I just want to say congratulations- first ever one shot was a complete success! Keep on writing More one shots and making people everywhere happy!

this is so devastating, how can you do this to us?!?!?!?! *cries*

sad, but a very, very very good one shot!

This was so sad and good! Loved it. I hope this can be more than a one shot!

it nearly broke my heart in the end. that was beautiful! i hope this gives you confidence to write more one shots--this was fabulous.

Then it happened. She approached me. And my life was irreversibly altered. - - Awww. Love to hear Sid talk about her like he did.

I didn’t like girls; I didn’t have time to like them and dad had always told me that hockey was to come first - -I have news for you Sidney. You like girls - and thank God for that!

“You talk a lot,” I interject.
“You don’t talk very much,” she retorts. - - Perfect Match. I just know you are going to break my heart with this aren't you.

“You want one?” she inquires. “’Cause I don’t have a boyfriend and I wouldn’t mind having one when school starts. And like I said, you’re really cute. You want a girlfriend?” - - DAMN a girl that knows what she wants. Now that's what Sid needs. Maybe even young Sid.

She’d always ‘gotten it’; she’d been my biggest and most supportive fan and she never let me get to big for my britches and had always knocked me down a peg or two if I so much started acting like a superstar around here. Bronwyn had been my refuge; her smile and her laugh had always been enough to brighten even the darkest of day. And as we’d gotten older I’d been able to lose myself in her arms; I’d been able to dive into the warmth and the security that her embraces and her kisses provided me with. -- Oh man - she's freaking perfect. Great, you're going to break my heart. I can feel it already.

Can I just say...BRAVO for the realistic virgin sex recap. I don't care what these stories say - It hurt...you bleed...and it's all around weird. I don't buy the whole orgasm on your first time bullshit. SO WELL DONE.

It would be the last time I’d ever see her; a congratulations and a Happy Birthday and a warm hug and a brief kiss on her part and a completely shattered heart on mine. - - NOOO SID - Don't just let her go...

“Whatever…” Staalsy huffs. “…but don’t come back here whining and crying like a little girl.” - - That Jordan is just so sensitive. LOL

OMG - that was so beautiful, and when I say that I legit have tears in my eyes, I'm telling the truth

That note...holy crap.

I'm not kidding... I demand you write a part 2...it has her bounding out of that restaurant looking for Sid. PLEASE....Pretty Please!!!

As always your writing is amazing. Now I know you can write one shots - you are so writing the two I asked for. No getting off the hook.

You better win this contest. Seriously. I don't need to torture myself reading everything else that was submitted. This is just so fucking good. (PART 2...Please.)

You have nothing to be nervous about, this was really good! (:
I like how detailed everything was.
Good luck and I hope you win! <3