Island of Myths - Comments

This is really interesting. But the font colour is a little hard to read, it really puts a lot of stress on the eyes. :p But good idea. I actually just began a story with a similar idea. haha

Yay thanks :D

Well I haven't read the story but I read the about so I'm definitely going to subscribe and I might read it when I've got a bit more time. As far as that layout you asked about. The one you've got right now is great, it's got a great theme and it's readable. I would change the color of the story title, or put a background behind it so it's easier to see. But it's still a great layout.

The semicolon thing one of my teachers tought me. I always thought it looked wierd though, and I think the comma was an accident. Comments are always appriciated so thanks! :D

You made a few grammatical mistakes in the summary of your story.

She and her three best friends in the world; Julie, Lianna, and Amy; all one night decide to go to Phoenix Island to watch the lunar eclipse when something mysterious happens.
That is not the proper way to use a semi-colon. Semi-colons are used to two connect two complete thoughts, that is, two complete sentences that are related. There, it is best to use a comma so that it instead reads She and her three best friends in the world, Julie, Lianna, and Amy, all one night decide to go Phoenix Island to watch the lunar eclipse when something mysterious happens.

They discover they, are really magical creatures with special powers.
No comma is needed.

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Wow, this story is really good. It's great to read a story on Mibba that's not centered around fan-fiction or romance. You should totally check out my story! It's a fantasy one, like yours. The Soul Sword.