I like the fact that this was a dream (: I'm doing a story based off a dream I had, although I read the two chapters I've already done and I feel like it's not very well written; at least not cOmpared to my other
I think the idea behind this is original and you've made it unique. I've never read anything like this on Mibba, something about ballet/dancing. And I'm curious to see what happens to Ty and Callie... ;D