Let Me Go - Comments

Okay i like love this story its so cute and i hope you update asap! Please!

You're very creative, I love your stories. You have to keep writing.

Please tell me when you update I've been trying to follow your story ,but school keeps getting in my way

Please tell me when you update I've been trying to follow your story ,but school keeps getting in my way

I love it. And I can't believe that some people would actually take girls from their lives and make them... Ughh *shudder

Keep writing please

I love this story! I can't wait for more!! :D Poor Addison. I hope stupid Magnus doesn't escape from the mental hospital. But knowing stories, he probably will. I really hope you update soon. Please get better soon. Check out my stories too please! :D

ooooh! now i want more! haha. cant wait for more :D

Loving the story!! Cant wait to read more awesomeness chapters!!!

This is reallly good
I must say I want more!
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MORE

Ok, so I just read the prologue.
Yes, the idea's different, but I really think you need to add more detail, and may more attention to grammar and spelling.
Like, you said 'I opened my eyes and saw a guy'. - That's not very descriptive.
'I opened my eyes and slowly registered a man in my view. His face looked gaunt and aged, maybe even in his thirties.' -Thats something that would be expectional.
You don't need to copy that, I just shot that one out, but consider adding more words and detail.
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Love thisssss

Absolutely amazing story! I love it! cant wait for more!

Awsome updated. I think this is really awsome.

lmao :)

This is so eerie!(:

It's quite creative but try capitilizing all of the singular ' I '

why thank you. :)

Please keep updating. You are very talented.

Intersting. Update soon.