I’m not trying to be mean or anything, but the premature thing really bothered me. My brother was a premature, and he’s lucky to be alive right now. :/ Sorry, but the chances of a premature baby being healthy is SO SLIM.
This sequel is as brilliant as the prequel! On it's completion I most definitely will have it put up for vote! There are a few little errors, but every story has them. Keep on writing!
Oh gosh i need to update. I'm always so busy and i always forget. Kay here's the plan : If i dont update by Sunday night you guys can feel free kick me out of the story =/