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@ Run.Away
The author was diabetic

NOOOOOO!!!!

NOOOOOO!!!!

I'm 17 and would be more than willing to do Matt Flyzik. Just sayin...

uhm.. I like the story, apart from the diabetic bit, we don't flail or arms, we just get the shakes, go white and collapse, but other than that, I like :)

1-I love this and will be more than willing to advertise it.
2-your writing got a lot better towards the end, but you might wannt edit the opening chapters. Like make sure the " " marks are there, italizing flashbacks and lyrics. Or you can just leave it, it's not too bad.

Yes! You updated! and just made my day. :) lol

Yay! I've finally get to read it! Lol so a lot has happened. The whole diabetic thing just blew me away. I was so shocked! And now if worrying about lane bc as far as I know she's the only other diabetic and I just hope nothing bads happene to her :( updates are appreciated lol update soon?

Yay! You updated!! Your the best lol but YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGIN LIKE THAT! why do they need two more bunks?! Why?! Lol so the next time you update you better explain. *glares* lol jk and I love where they were talkin and she's like, "those idiots on the other bus" Lol I laughed so hard at that. Haha :) update update update! Pretty please? :D

I really really really wish you would update this...like now. lol as soon as you read this because I'm really (wow ok imma stop using that word) lookin forward to see what happens all out on the tour! and I'm glad how you added in lullibies. I love that song and as soon as I read the chapter with alex and conner playing it I started to cry because I have this feeling taht conner thinks about James when he's playing it. :( *Sniff sniff* but its really good and Rue was a really pretty name for a girl. :) The only thing I'm worried about now is if I'll be able to go to sleep tonight because Lullabies is the song that puts me to sleep. no joke lol. So I hope I don't cry tonight.

...otherwise I'll blame you. >:P lol jk no i won't =D update really soon please? I'm subscribed! So now I get emails! But yeah you get the point! :)
*Hugs*

Awwww! Thanks for putting me in the story! I cant wait for the next chapter :3

Thought Id give it a shot and read this :]
first off, in the descripton alexander is adorable! haha
chapter 1:
haha poor Rue with a boring ass job xD
there seeing all time low! lucky little butts
haha Jack does jsut like walk around the stage and shit at concerts too xD
chapter 2:
haha Jade and Jace sound fun!
they have a good schedule, at least Rue is with someone all the time :]
she gave the teacher free tickets? wow
i dont get why conner crys every time he hears lullabies...
and ohhh a gig! :] <3