We're All Just Locks or Keys - Comments

This is fantastic and enthralling I love it!

Fantastic! <3
I'm all caught up now. I can't wait for more! :D

I love this story!
I love the whole lock and key idea. It's genius.
Keep updating! :))

I'm so glad you told me about this story, 'cause it's amazing! I love the whole lock and key thing, really clever. The character's Echo and Shadow are perfect, right down to their name.
The only critique I have about it is that it gets a bit confusing when Echo's explaining about her mom and father and second father. But, hey, you know me, I could be having one of those blond moments.
Anyways, this story's really intriguing and you better right more soon, missy! xD

Chapter 4:
I should have just kept reading. Haha. Wow. This is really deep. That poor girl.
I'm so engulfed in this story. I can't wait to find out more. Please don't wait too long before the next update. This story is really incredible.
Okay, I'm done being a creep with the comments. :P

For Chapter 3:
You've made Echo's life so engaging. To the point where I almost want to beg her to tell me why she doesn't speak. And why she is so closed off. I also feel like I can relate to her though. I envy her detachment from the people around her.
What is Echo by the way? Her mother flies...So I don't what that would make her. Expecially that her father is human.

Alright so I'm going to comment on every chapter as I read them. I hope that's okay.
So Chapter 2: Fantastic again. I had no idea that these characters weren't merely people. Which I think makes this story even more interesting.
I hope to find out more about the different types of people in this world.
Ok, on to the next chapter! :)

You have hooked a sub!!
Wow, I love this. The locks and keys, the metaphor is amazing. And the names!
Ha, I'm only at the beginning and I seriously can't wait for more!!