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tigerfan65 (100)

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Can you please finish this story?

February 7th, 2012 at 05:31am

smileygirl200 (100)

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This is an amazing story! Please update ASAP! I need to know what's going to happen when she moved back to California... I'm subscribing immediately! :D

January 8th, 2012 at 05:15pm

just.breathe. (100)

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I have fell in love with your story!!!!! You have serious talent!!!

October 2nd, 2010 at 10:33pm

Brunette Vengeance (105)

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Nice update.
It would be heartbreaking if she goes back to Cali.
Hope you update soon!

October 1st, 2010 at 04:35am

unbroken13 (100)

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<3

September 30th, 2010 at 01:40am

MarinaBlack (100)

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update

September 21st, 2010 at 12:42am

willy ; (100)

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I love this xD Chapter 9 was super hilarious at the end. Jacob's a horny dog xD update soon :D

August 31st, 2010 at 11:58pm

iFeel.Like.A.Monster (100)

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Love it!!

August 30th, 2010 at 02:12pm

amaya.-. (100)

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I really liked your latest chapter.
The tension between Laney and Jacob was really well written :)

Loved it

-Xx

August 30th, 2010 at 12:24pm

iFeel.Like.A.Monster (100)

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great update

i hope shes going to be okay

August 29th, 2010 at 01:52pm

Brunette Vengeance (105)

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Wow.
I hope she's going to be okay.
Please update soon!

August 25th, 2010 at 03:05am

Maggie R. Mason (100)

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Great story. One of the best Twilight fan fics I've read. Update soon! :)

August 20th, 2010 at 11:41pm

Brunette Vengeance (105)

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They finally kissed without any interuptions!
Amazing update.
Can't wait for more.

August 20th, 2010 at 10:10pm

unbroken13 (100)

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awe

August 20th, 2010 at 09:09pm

theohsosweetnitemare (100)

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This is really g o o d !
So intriguing ! (:
update soon .

August 20th, 2010 at 08:36pm

Brunette Vengeance (105)

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Amazing updates!
I was kinda shocked at how harsh Sam was being with Laney.
Can't wait for more.

August 20th, 2010 at 12:05am

iFeel.Like.A.Monster (100)

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Amazing!!!!!!!!!!

Sam shouldn't have been so harsh on her......bad Sam!

Update soon

August 19th, 2010 at 04:43pm

skinny love. (150)

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You have grammer errors.
Instead of having it like this:

"Hello," He said.
"Hi," She said back.

It should be like this:

"Hello," He said.

"Hi," She said back.

Other than that, this is really good so far. (:

August 18th, 2010 at 11:17pm

Brunette Vengeance (105)

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I just found this story and it is amazing so far.
Bella seems like a jerk to her Laney.
Keep it up and can't wait until the next chapter!

August 13th, 2010 at 03:49am