The Medicine. - Comments

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This was cool. I thought she was at a meeting with a therapist, it was really awesome, the way it ended. Very different and very impressive. It was also kind of creepy in the way that your character is clearly insane, and she seems to be aware and accepting of that fact.

I noticed one spelling mistake: at the very beginning, “starring” should be “staring”.

This was very well written and had a wonderful twist at the end of it. It was highly impressive and it gripped your attention fully. I liked the way tiny snippets of her life were revealed through her speech. It was all very interesting, good job =]

I thought this was completely original and different.
Which is a grand thing.
In some odd way I found it to be sad and adorable.
Really; great work. :D

Really clever, yet sad. It was amazing :)