You've set the standard very high, well done! I like your writing style and good for you staying under the word limits! I like this story. Chapter 2 was good, short and sweet like the rest of the story.
A very good start. Well done for keeping under 100 words! They layout is cool and the first chapter got my attention. I look forward to the next chapter!
Good job!
August 13th, 2010 at 02:13pm
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Well done! :)