August 7th, 2012 at 08:15pm
Comment swapperino!
Well, I think you should have this proofread because I noticed you struggled a little bit with your writing. I spotted a few grammar mistakes and also wrong punctuation. But don't worry, just write more and more and read a lot and soon you'll be writing perfectly. I felt the layout was a little too blue for me, but that's your personal taste :D
As for the plot, it's not something I'd usually go for, but it seemed interesting. Keep working!
Well, I think you should have this proofread because I noticed you struggled a little bit with your writing. I spotted a few grammar mistakes and also wrong punctuation. But don't worry, just write more and more and read a lot and soon you'll be writing perfectly. I felt the layout was a little too blue for me, but that's your personal taste :D
As for the plot, it's not something I'd usually go for, but it seemed interesting. Keep working!