there's a deep meaning to it. and you do start thinking about things more intense than you did before but at the same time you can understand it easily. i'm liking it (:
February 26th, 2011 at 03:23pm
I really liked it.
The prologue made me think and I can somewhat relate to it.
It was interesting and made me want to read further.
I like the content of the first chapter as well, Kato seems like an interesting character, I love his cynic outlook. I also like the suspense you've created, it keeps me wanting to read more.
What bothered me though, were grammar mistakes and the lack of punctuation and paragraphs.
And I think it would make the whole story way more interesting if you took your time with description.
Overall, I think this story has a lot of potential.
Keep up the good work. :)
