Okay, here's Iggy! Unwillingly commenting on your story :) Yaaay!!!
Okay, well, the opening part of my other comment (the one that got deleted...) was how even just the summary got me sad. So... Assshhhllleeeiiiggghhh!!! Why must you make it so depressing? Why not happy? Must you be so meeeaaan?
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Hey, guess what. Iggy does not like the beginning. Much like the summary, there's too much sad, not enough happy.
Hahahaha, I love her. Just, wow. I love how she's just all... I don't even know. I love how she thinks he's just being charitable when he's actually asking her out :)
Okay, I'm just going to skip past most of the story, because I don't know what to say and forgot what I had on the last one.
Aww, the song's so sweet! (And it's completely adorable the way I picture him doing it :) But why did you have to ruin it?! she didn't have to tell him that she was dying right then! ... Potato head!
Okay, I'm just going to skip past the part where he actually stays with her, because all I can really say about it is that it's adorable :) (... Oh, I guess, technically, I didn't skip it, then... Oopsies...)
Okay, and as a sidenote, the end made me cry the first time I read it. (Yep, I'm immune to it, this time... Simply because I didn't really read it, I just skimmed over it...)
But that was awful mean of you. There's too much death and sadness in this. Too fucking much.
Oh, and for future reference, you need to stop being such a good writer, okay? The rest of us need some time to catch up. (Especially poor little Iggy!)