Arranged to Marry a Guitar God - Comments

Reaper's Mistress (100)

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I am having a bad case of writer's block and am trying my hardest to get the next chapter written so bare with me.

March 18th, 2008 at 05:35am

woof ima moo (100)

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omg i love your story!! plz update.

March 11th, 2008 at 11:34pm

Write_Your_Heart_Out (100)

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NOOO. i hate it when it ends lol. Write more, it is MUY amazing

January 17th, 2008 at 12:04am

Reaper's Mistress (100)

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Thanks and I will try that the next one should be out in the next two days probably.

December 31st, 2007 at 09:13pm

Wild Eyed Jokers (100)

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May I good-naturedly make the suggestion that you put the dialog in quotations instead of after a colon? It's kind of annoying as is, and it will help with the flow if you change it. Other seemingly small grammatic changes can really boost your story. :)

December 31st, 2007 at 08:00pm

DemolitionLover. (100)

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ZOMG! No comments!

-Comment virginity!-

Nice story. More soon?

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December 31st, 2007 at 07:33pm