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  • UN-RESERVED

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    Whoaa!!! Crazy!! I'm so love'in it!! :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:49pm
  • teenagedream

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    OOOOMG OMG YOU NEED TO KEEP UPDATING!!! I was like geez what's going to happen now that she's back oh craaaapp :O
    BUT THEN YOU END IT!!!
    sabrina is beast B)

    btw, I love it when you put outfits in there darling :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 07:16pm
  • lemongumdrops

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    Sabrina and Ryan are finally together! haha I love hungover Sabrina! Uh Oh Justin and Natalie finally saw each other again....Now I'm waiting for what Natalie might say. Lovely chapter :D
    December 13th, 2010 at 04:43pm
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    YAAAAY!
    Sabrina and NAT!
    I liked this chapter, Maya is still awesome, and Natalie is back, I like how it affected Justin alot, how he tensed and couldn't run, wonder what Nat's reaction would be?
    xD
    Update soon, i love this story
    December 13th, 2010 at 11:34am
  • swell

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    OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HEART ATTACK.
    MY HEART LITERALLY STOPPED.
    DAMN GIRL, THIS UPDATE SHOULD COME SOON SO MY HEART doesn't stop again.
    Great chapter.
    December 13th, 2010 at 08:21am
  • ellaax

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    ah lovelovelove this story. i wish more people would comment so you'd update quicker haha. i really like where you've been going with be with me.
    December 13th, 2010 at 05:57am
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    So, I've been reading this entire story since part one! It's freaking amazing!! I really can't wait until Nat takes her role in the story! Vanessa is going to go out the window :)

    Ahaha, great story. Your such an awesome writer! Like . . . Seriously. lOl
    December 11th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • Morgansaurus.'

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    MAAAAYAA!
    Aww yay :D
    So glad she's back.
    I noticed how he paused on Natalies name. You do awesome jobs at writing.
    Update soon(:
    December 6th, 2010 at 10:13am
  • crazykeely429

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    I love this story. From the characters to the concept, just amazing. Cant wait to see Natalie again. Please update again :)
    December 6th, 2010 at 05:20am
  • Sand1012

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    Good story and ya Wen is Natalie coming??
    December 6th, 2010 at 02:43am
  • teenagedream

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    Maya made this chapter the best so far :) I can't believe she's dyed her hair :P
    UPDAAAATE SOOON PLEASE<33
    December 5th, 2010 at 10:25pm
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    please update soon!
    i have a feeling that vanessa's with him for the fame...
    am i right? am i right? am i right?
    :D
    haha dont answer that(:
    December 5th, 2010 at 06:38pm
  • Morgansaurus.'

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    Vanessa sounds pretty cool so far.
    I really like that last sentence, has got me thinking :)
    You always surprise me, bahaa.
    And the way you write about Justin's fans, is pretty spot on, some are just too obsessive and hate everyone he likes, so you got that all down tap. I like how you write, cos you make it seem real. like it's actually happening.
    When's Nat coming? haha i love her xP
    Update soon
    November 28th, 2010 at 08:24am
  • bl00mer_

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    please tell me that natalie is in the next chapter!! stupid vanessa...she's a skankazoid!
    November 28th, 2010 at 07:00am
  • swell

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    I really hope that Nat is back to win Justin's heart.
    Nat is still in the story, right?
    Vanessa is going to get her anorexic ass kicked by the stubborn and hella gorgeous Nat.
    ICAN'TFREAKINGWAIT.
    November 28th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • Chrissy!

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    See.
    I'm glad i'm not the only one confused.
    So.
    Is Natalie out of the story?
    Or, What?
    I'm soooooo confused.
    November 27th, 2010 at 06:06pm
  • lemongumdrops

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    This makes a lot more sense now! I'm so excited to see what the future holds!
    November 27th, 2010 at 06:03pm
  • key to my heart x

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    Natalie's gonna be in New York!! :D
    I love your story, keep it up :D xoxox
    November 27th, 2010 at 12:07pm
  • Sand1012

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    This looks like it's goin to be an interesting story. UPDATE REALLY FAST PLZZZZ!!!
    November 27th, 2010 at 10:48am
  • Dangerous_luver

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    more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!if i have to put 16 comments on this i will just tell meh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 27th, 2010 at 05:04am