(Hopeless) Days of Autumn - Comments

I loved it! Short, and sweet, very nice.

Wow, Aliyah.

This is amazing. A favorite story for sure.

Wow.

Aliyah, that was perfect. Absofuckinglutely perfect. You got Tom completely write. It was dead-on. The descriptions were just so lovely and everything was so detailed and easily read. I loved this concept. It's a perfect aftermath that I had never thought of until now.

It was just so so great I don't even know. I loved every single little bit of it.

During the lazy indian summer in September they plan on sleeping in late, making love to classical films, and taking pictures of the landscape in sepia and black and white tones. When her goldfish dies Autumn wants a ferret that she'll name Hansen and when she gets too engrossed in their lust—and 500 boring days have passed—he'll put an end to their relationship and move onto the dark moon and cold, crisp feel that Winter brings.

That paragraph just made my heart flutter. Usually I absolutely hate the term making love but for the very first time I actually think it fits well, I'm glad you used it. And the ending was just so, I can't even think of a word to say. But it was the exact perfect end to a perfect story.

Amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing.