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  • Gorgak

    Gorgak (100)

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    OMFFB! At first I was so sad that his daughter was stolen from him... :( but I was too concentrated on WHAT WAS IN THE BAG?! WHAT WAS HE GOING TO DO WITH THAT THING IN THE BAG?!
    and then... I read it was a human heart and all I said was, "Oh... no..."
    AND THEN HE ATE IT! >:O OMFFB!
    It was a really good twist... a dark twist... but a great one :D
    LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
    :D
    I see though that the voice is basically his mind telling him to do crazy stuff like every other psychopath out there with their own voice... or was he schizophrenic? hmm... powerful questions... haha :D
    January 8th, 2011 at 07:34pm
  • roux.

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    While reading through, I was more than happy to be all sympathetic and what not to his cause. The last bit:

    Blocking out the invisible voice, he grabbed a fork. Right out of the pan, he stuck a piece on. "I'm sorry, Sarah."

    He ate it.

    however, had me going WTF?! to the power of infinity.

    Scratch my sympathy - this dude should seriously die! Yuuuckkk!!

    Thanks for entering the contest!
    August 18th, 2010 at 03:19pm
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