Bleed - Comments

Layout Creativity and Readability ~ 14/15
- The print is a little hard to read when grouped into such large paragraphs. But overall very nice layout. Oh, also the picture on the summary page is to big for this layout.

Grammar&&Spelling ~ 8/10
- There were a few grammatical errors as well as a few spelling errors. But they didn't take from the story.

Effort ~ 10/10
- There was definitely a lot of effort put into this story. :)

Detail&&Storyline ~ 10/10
- This was an amazing story. Very well thought out and written nicely. The story was very sad and heart wrenching

How Well You Follow The Rules ~ 10/10

Thank you for entering this amazing story into my contest. I will message you when I have made my decision.

So much for comment virginity. x.x
This is ME, by the way. On Star(;D)'s account. ^.^
And of course, I already told you I love it. ;D
Eyb won!

That was so beautiful.
Oh god I actually ended up crying. Great job.
It was so well written. Perfect :)
Thankyou for entering