It was good. It had foreshadowing, which I liked. The story structure itself was a little off, because you did not space your paragraphs enough, and I was not really sure how the layout matched your story.
(A very late judging on "The Last Thing You Said to Me" contest. I sincerely apologize!) I'll have the winners up by Friday or sometime this weekend.
(A very late judging on "The Last Thing You Said to Me" contest. I sincerely apologize!) I'll have the winners up by Friday or sometime this weekend.