Hahahahahahahaha I love this!!!!!!!! That was great :) I was laughing throughout it in a good way :) Much better than mine :) I will look forward to reading this. :)
And just a tip, there were some words that you mispelled or had grammatical errors with, so just check to make sure they're spelled right or grammatically correct. That's all. Other than that, I love this more than my story :)
Loved it, loved it, loved it :) I'll link you on my profile so any of my other readers of my Icing on the Cake checks this out okay???? Okay. :)