Touch of Ivory - Comments

This is absolutely breathtaking and the the layout is amazing! I love it :D

I finally caught up. I really like where this story is going....then again, it can go anywhere and I think I would still like where it goes. Your writing continues to be beautiful and outstanding, and I just don't know how you do it. Oh well, I shall be awaiting your next update.

Absolutely loving this story :)

So after much deep and philosophical contemplation, I totally think you should change the title of this story to "Touch of Awesomeness" because this story is just so OWNAGE. ORRR you could change it to "ZOMG, Maisweetlove Is Such An Amazing Author". I would totally read a story with that title, just sayin..

:P

Oh the suspense! The drama! The mystery!
I really really really want to know why Nihal left! I know you have been hinting about it quite artistically in most of your chapters and now I MUST KNOW!

I thought all the characters in Bodrum were mysterious and had lots of secrets. But now it turns out the only person who still has those secrets is your main protagonist!!! You are so so so so talented and I love this story! It is AMAZING! :D I'm sure we will all be satisfied with whatever it is!

Another awesome update. Jealous.
And I totally loved this bit: The air was barely breathable as if stripped down from every single molecule of oxygen and was filled with the sound of million insects chirping together like some out of tune orchestra that roasts under the sun all day.
I don't know why, but I love it. xD Oh and...I want Selim. Even though he wasn't in this, I still want him for myself. Haha.

I like this story A LOT. XD I've been in the mood to read some feel good stories lately, and this is another one! I'm very happy I decided to read this. The only thing I don't really like is the overuse of gerunds in your writing. You could easily reword your sentences with those and make your writing go from great to...whatever is better than great for you. Haha. *dodges bricks*

OMG WOMAN I squealed like a little girl on Christmas! This chapter made me ridiculously happy! And it's official, I'm totally stealing Selim from this story. You'll just have to make up some other character to replace him to continue the story because I want him to myself :)

KThanksBye :D

Perhaps, perhaps perhaps :P

love ya all YOU ARE THE BEST!

Omg. What was this chapter? "She's my girl?" omg. I literally squealed when I read it! How could you stop there? I need to know!
I love it. I love it. I love it! and I love Salim.
I don’t know why you think that you need another rewrite because I think it's perfect just the way it is<3
But seriously, no words can express how much I'm in love with this story right now.

Oh, Selim.

and is it just me or is there a somthing somthing with Bengu and Oktay ....just saying=P

Swooooonnnn... <3 I love it.

LOVE IT <3

I love this chapter!
Selim and Nihal are so perfect together. I'm jealous.
I can't wait for the next chapter!

I can't believe I didn't know you updated this until now! I procrastinated on homework to read this yay! And it's so lovely! I really really like Selim in this chapter :) Well, actually, I just like Selim regardless, as I'm sure you know haha ;)

This is so lovely, and so beautiful. I can't get over it's beauty or it's loveliness.

First off, the layout, oh my. <33

And the content is so original and sweetly written, I'm jealous. I love this, and I'm subscribing.

I absolutely love this story! It's just one of those stories that draw you in. You have done a fantastic job, keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter!

When I read this I was like 'why am I just reading this?' god I'm so lazy=P

Anyway, I have to say that you’re a wonderful writer. With each sentence I read you amaze me even more. The characters, the description… they're all so real. I feel like I say this a lot but it's true.

And might I add that i liked Selim from the start but then I saw the picture and my jaw dropped a little. Why did he have to have a wet clinging shirt! WHY!

Excuse me while I go hypervenalate.

OH EM GEEE I loved this chapter!!! Your characters are so natural and believable! It's like stepping into a refreshing sea-side world every time I read this story and it's wonderful!!!

I am soo obsessed with this story!!! And you've written it so well! The characters seem very real and I'm sure there is at least one person in real life that I know that are similar to all your characters!!! :D
Can't wait for the next update!!!

During my free period at school, I was reading this, however I didn't have time earlier today to leave a comment. Any who, I absolutely love the update! Actually, I really love this story! I love how when I'm reading it that I feel like I am the one experiencing the culture and it just feels so real!

Marvelous job, and I look forward to this awesome update you speak of ;)