Touch of Ivory - Comments

I've said it before and I'll say it again.
I LOVE THE WAY YOU DISCRIBE THINGS.
You're such a great writer!

A freaking perfect story! I love it all, and you have made me get a soft spot for Oktay (hope I spelled it write) :)

This is amazing. I'm so excited for the future updates!

<3 <3 <3 :)

Lady, I cannot find anything wrong with this story (the spelling errors don't even count!). I love how real and human Nihal is. I love her observations, they're so vivid and real and easy to relate to. I've said it once, and I'll say it again: you are a wonderful writer that has bundles of talent, and anyone who doesn't see that is crazy.

I really love this already :)

OH HI I LOVE THIS LAYOUT. k bye.

i love love this story!
it is already so rich in description
and honestly feels as though i'm reading a published novel :)
you are beyond talented! <3

this is perfect. I finally read the three chapters and I have to say that this is awesome. you write it as if it was your real story and it's wonderful. it really seems the tale of a real person! you really are a good writer, Dilek!!

I've only just finished the second chapter 'cause I have to go to work and want to sit and relax while reading this wonderful piece of literature. But so far, you have dragged me into an entirely new world and new culture. I love how you are enlightening so many of your readers and creating a character who I can relate certain 'shy' practices to. IE. when she was pretending to 'gaze over' the guy in the blue shirt, which is how I stare at people. haha.

I love it, as always, and you are a wonderful writer. I will comment again when I finish chapter 3!

:) more, more

Dude, this just keeps getting better and better!
I'm in love with how you include so much culture into this.
I've never read anything quite like it.

The only thing I noticed was that the last two paragraphs in chapter two are written in present tense, while the rest of the story is in past tense. Try to watch that, hm? I usually only notice it because I make the same mistake all the time as well. xD

Anyays. I really adore this. Can't wait until you update again! <3

I can't wait to have time to read this!!! maybe tomorrow!! YOU ROCK!!

i'm already in love

wow, i am already loving this! you're style of writing is so developed and wonderful :)

Aww thank you all!!! ^.^

This so does not suck! The layout and the first chapter are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GAHH, the first chapter is wonderful.
I'm still totally curious to see where this goes.

Eek! The layout is absolutely gorgeous and the summary sounds so incredibly interesting. (:

This looks interesting already.
The summary is very intruiging!

Can't wait until you start. <33