I liked that. I'm glad they are willing to work everything out, even if it's just for Kendell to start off with. Great work and I will most def be checking out ur Adsy story =)
Pat is a complete douche. I hope he realizes that and Kaicee should not put up with it for much longer! Love the update and I can't wait to see what happens next!
If I was Erica or any of Pat's sisters I would have punched him in the face. Hockey player or not, he's being an asshole. I hope Patrick changes because there's only so much Kacie (sp? lol) can take before she really leaves and he never sees Kendell again. Great update. Can't wait for more =) Keep it up!
Great update! Poor Kaicee, Pat is being a jerk. It sucks he chose to go out and party the same night his daughter was born. The ending of the chpater was great, sounds like Pat is going to learn a lesson wether he want to or not. Awsome writing love all the details.